Poems illustrate dangers of texting while driving
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Cache Valley Daily
Story Created:
Mar 24, 2010 at 1:03 PM MST
Story Updated:
Mar 24, 2010 at 1:03 PM MST
The following is a letter CacheValleyDaily received regarding the dangers of texting while driving and the powerful effect Reggie Shaw's story has had on people around the country.
After hearing so much about the dangers of texting while driving, I wanted to do something to help in this cause. I wrote two poems about the dangers of texting while driving, but don't really know what to do with them. What a shame to write and then stick them in a drawer to just fade away. I want to do something good with the poems that I write and am looking for an avenue to use them in.
Again, this is the poem that I wrote after seeing a segment on FOX 23 News out of Tulsa, Oklahoma. It made me think about how I could help in this quest to make people more aware of the dangers of texting while driving.
I want to go to my local high schools, here in Kansas and talk to the students about this danger. I want to use Reggie Shaw’s video to bring the message home to them and then hand out my poems that students, will hopefully, pass on to others or hang on their bedroom wall. Many will probably end up in the trash, but if I can help save just one life, it will be worth my effort. This is not just a passing phase and does not only affect our youth. Our adult drivers are doing the same with their busy schedules, with places to go and people to see. So this is also for them.
The first poem
You think it’s not a big deal
You've been driving several years
But have you really thought about
The cause of many tears
What if…....for just an instance
Your eyes have left the road
Your hands were busy TEXTING
And your mind was in THAT mode
It only takes a second
To make a fatal mistake
And once that it has happened
The consequences are hard to take
You say that it won't happen to me
I'm ALWAYS in control
But what about the time it did
Was it worth the life you stole?
So keep your phone out of arms reach
Until you've reached your destination
YOU are responsible for your actions
Driving deserves your concentration
Must it always take disaster?
To open up our eyes
Please teach by your example
Before more of America dies....
This is such a serious problem and I want to help it "STOP"!!! I feel responsible, as should everyone else, to try and do something to stop the killing. When you talk on your cell phone or text, it is probably not a life or death situation. If it is, pull over and concentrate on your call at that time.
Inattentive driving IS now and always has been against the law.
What if it was a member of your family, coming home from school or work, or your Mother coming home from the store, and by your distraction, was the ones you hurt or killed. I have seen people holding on to their phones, whether talking or texting - Doesn't matter, the end result could be the same. Not only could it affect the ones you connect with, but your life as well.
What is now a happy life could quickly turn into a life of pain for all involved.
My brother in law showed me a video on Youtube the other night and it helped me to come up with another poem that I feel would be useful to anyone who drives.
It was about a young man, Reggie Shaw, sitting in jail and talking about the accident that he had caused by texting and driving. He was saying he didn't mean for it to happen and he wished he could change it now.
He was texting and went just barely across the center lane on the highway and hit a blue car with two men in it, just minding their own business.
The car they were driving, turned into the oncoming lane and a truck pulling a horse trailer, hit them broadside and took the car to the ditch. The truck went broadside, all the way through the vehicle and killed both men on impact. What a terrible image. What a more terrible outcome for the families of these two men and the young man who cared more about texting his friends than paying attention to keeping everyone, including himself, safe on the highway.
The second poem
I saw a video today
About a young man sitting in jail
He was understandably, emotionally sad
No one could post his bail
He had caused a terrible accident
In where two men had died
He could not bring them back again
No matter how he tried
If only I had…....he said out loud
If I had only paid more attention
Instead of texting on my phone
Gave driving more concentration
Lack of responsibility
Is why I'll serve my time
What a terrible mistake I made
In committing this awful crime
Without even meaning to
I changed so many lives
I'll tell my story to the world
And anyone who drives
Please pay more attention
Don't make the same mistake
Of TEXTING while your driving
For fear of a life to take
Try talking to the families
And explain such a selfish act
How you acted so irresponsibly
There's no way to take it back
PLEASE help me to spread the word
We've got to get it said
TEXTING while you’re driving
Could end up with someone dead.
If these poems can be of any help whatsoever, feel free to use them. I would be interested if someone did use them to spread the word.
Carolyn Vannoster
3315 CR 2800
Independence, KS 67301
dcck@totelcsi.com
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Melissa said on Monday, May 2 at 8:44 PM
I am using your poem! They are very pretty and touching, I posted it on FB so all my friends could see and share with their frinds!
66260184Noelle said on Wednesday, Mar 30 at 3:27 PM
These are great peoms. i am going to use one of them in a speech i am giving on friday
63764677chanel johnson said on Sunday, Oct 17 at 3:04 PM
thanks for trying to get the message across i am looking at these poems because i want to use them in my speech interpretation class on monday. I am older and i am trying to open the eyes of others. hopefully it will have a positive effect. even if it touched at least one person, that would be wonderful.
53990569Marina Kaleiohi in Oxnard, Ca said on Thursday, Sep 16 at 10:31 AM
These are really nice poems I am going to use them in my speech oral interpretation class on monday. Hopefully it will open up someone's eyes after hearing this important message. There are so many people out there texting and driving especially after class and people are texing an there phones It drives me crazy because I dont drive and Im the passenger most of the time and I see so many people on there cell phones it like really. They just neet to stop!!!
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